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雅思写作高分范文—改善社区的举措

2017/8/14 17:23:55    上海新航道学校

摘要: 雅思写作是中国考生们的一大头疼科目,难以提高的科目.上海新航道雅思小编雅思写作高分范文—改善社区的举措,希望帮助考生对照写作范文研究真题,充分备考,争取理想成绩,实现留学梦想。

  雅思写作是中国考生们的一大头疼科目,难以提高的科目.上海新航道雅思小编雅思写作高分范文—改善社区的举措,希望帮助考生对照写作范文研究真题,充分备考,争取理想成绩,实现留学梦想。


  You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live.

  What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why?

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  雅思写作范文:

  I think the question what would I do if I had a chance to improve my community is difficult. I have in my mind many things, the improvement of which will make our community better place to live but they all require the participation of many people and, moreover, they require investments, which I can not provide. For example, my community is quite noisy. We have the huge mall just in front of our community, so traffic jams are very common for this place. I think that the construction of a few pass-by roads will benefit all people who live here as well as people who drive by every day.


  Unfortunately, the question is what I can do for my community giving a few hours of my time every month. I think I can not do much, but I still can help someone in my community. For example, I can baby-sit. I know a couple of families with little children, who can not afford to spend much money on the baby-sitter. One of these families is a single mom with a little girl. Julia, this is her name, is a waitress in a restaurant. She is a great person and we became close friends. So, sometimes I offer her help with her child when she has to work in the evenings. Another family has two funny little twins. One time their parents asked me to babysit their children because they had to attend an unexpected presentation.


  I think this kind of help brings many benefits to my community. First of all, people become friendlier. For example, those families, which I mentioned above, became friends after I introduced them to each other. Second of all, people get to know each other and feel more secure in their houses and apartments. Finally, I am ready to help those people because I am sure that they will help me too. One time I lost the keys from my car and Julia offered me her car for a while.


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