Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【句子示例】 Encouraging a competitive atmosphere through exams or diverse competitions can equip children with essential skills to navigate future challenges, such as competing for places at prestigious universities or coveted job opportunities.
2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion) 在这个句子之后,写作者可以考虑具体列举哪些方面的能力能够通过竞争得到提升,比如时间管理能力,独立解决问题的能力。写作者还可以强调竞争意识能够激发动力,因为如果想要超越对手就需要更专注和更投入,这些能帮助孩子实现自己最大化的潜能(reach one’s full potential)。
4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy) 本句的主语是encouraging a competitive atmosphere through exams or diverse competitions,注意encouraging是动名词。本句的谓语动词是can equip,后面的宾语是children,with引导的介词短语提出了essential skills这一概念,后面to do是动词不定式的用法,表达了这些技能的作用是应对未来的挑战。such as后面列举了具体的挑战,包括竞争名校的入学机会,以及获得梦寐以求的工作机会。需要注意such as的后面需要接名词或者名词短语,不能接句子。